origami backwards : what you get when paper unfolds
i LOVE the line 'etched on my inner eye'! beautiful words. :-)
Oh, yes, that second one hits (really hard and with quite a thump) home. :-)
The second one caught my breath!
these are very emotionally vivid.
Both of these are great! I like how in each there is a feeling of aloneness that shifts -- like in the first with the image lingering and being etched --and in the second with meeting someone. Really nice.:)
I'm so glad I discovered your blog -- your poetry is beautiful, and so visually clear. You say so much with so little!
They are both great, but I was very struck by the second.
The second is very powerfully done. Thank you.
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i LOVE the line 'etched on my inner eye'! beautiful words. :-)
Oh, yes, that second one hits (really hard and with quite a thump) home. :-)
The second one caught my breath!
these are very emotionally vivid.
Both of these are great! I like how in each there is a feeling of aloneness that shifts -- like in the first with the image lingering and being etched --and in the second with meeting someone. Really nice.
:)
I'm so glad I discovered your blog -- your poetry is beautiful, and so visually clear. You say so much with so little!
They are both great, but I was very struck by the second.
The second is very powerfully done. Thank you.
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